(Mike From NW Queens is a regular reader of this little therapy website, and an occasional commentator. He's been saving it up. The other night, Mike took a health walk and snapped a photo of the moon, and got to thinking, and later he wrote a poem, except he didn't think it was a poem, just the musings of a guy taking a walk. Here it is, unchanged, but arranged in stanzas. Maybe you noticed, this is a New Jersey moon, not a NW Queens moon. They have a different moon in New Jersey. Thanks, Mike. GV.) Yes, It Is Still There
I took a walk early tonight Cold? A bit, so what? As I finished the loop, I noticed the crystal clear moon in the sky. Yes, still there. Still beautiful, our natural satellite (thank you, Wikipedia) A site for sore eyes tonight, too. Moonstruck! (Couldn't resist) Sometimes the doldrums set in. Covid, this or that, Whatever. May be more mental than anything. Golf clubs. I know where they are, but they are dormant, for now. You heard it, for now. But the moon caught my eye and made me grateful, pushed the cold weather aside, put the other noise aside for a bit. Someday, normalcy will be what normal was. Who knows? What’s my point? Enjoy the moment, enjoy what is in front of you. Who you are with. Your job, a warm house, a turkey burger on an english muffin! The little things....... Not all gifts come wrapped.... 20/20 vision, being able to choose to take a walk, headphones, and tonight, listening to the Rolling Stones’ greatest hits, tomorrow, free to choose something else. Sounds normal. I am rambling. Thanks for being my friend. One day at a time. --- Mike From NW Queens 1/19/2022 03:58:12 pm
So many great lines here. Enjoy the moment, the surroundings, the friends...etc, etc. At least it helped me get through my "writer's block" long enough to pen these lines! Carry on!
George
1/19/2022 04:07:17 pm
Jim, funny coincidence. The other day on a Zoom call, my niece's daughter, age 11, asked me what to do about writer's block.
Steve Jellinek
1/19/2022 04:02:39 pm
Wonderful, Mike from NW Queens. Thanks for passing this on, George.
Alan D. Levine
1/19/2022 04:17:15 pm
Really nice poem, Mike. But turkey burgers???
Tom Jolly
1/19/2022 04:43:27 pm
Jersey moons can be inspiring, but Mike can be even more so! Thanks for sharing these thoughts in such poetic style, Mike. (And George!)
Wayne from NJ
1/21/2022 08:11:05 am
Poetic, Mike!
Altenir Silva
1/19/2022 06:53:05 pm
George: Beautiful poem. If the moon has eyes, she's looking for our planet with sweet despair. By the way, Mike did a great poem, very inspirational.
Randolph
1/19/2022 08:03:47 pm
Mike and George,
GV
1/19/2022 09:25:47 pm
Randy, thanks so much. Perfect haiku.
Mike From NW Queens
1/19/2022 11:29:25 pm
I cannot thank everyone enough for all the kind words and more. Another gift.
Ed Martin
1/19/2022 11:32:15 pm
“Crystal Clear moon.” What a fine image, and I’m not sure I ever heard it used before. It also carries a sense of icy cold with it.
Phyllis Rosenthal
1/20/2022 08:10:36 am
George Vecsey
1/20/2022 09:29:35 am
Cunningham Park, baby, Cunningham Park.
Randolph
1/20/2022 08:15:21 am
Ed,
weiss
1/20/2022 09:23:36 am
kaiku 5-7-5 I love to struggle with
Josh Rubin
1/20/2022 12:35:32 pm
That's some really nice found poetry!
Judith Fishkin
1/21/2022 10:33:52 am
Talk about mind fullness. this poem is a gift
George
1/21/2022 08:43:06 pm
Josh, well done. Oddly enough, I wrote about that book when it came out. 1/21/2022 06:48:09 pm
I enjoyed both the poetry and colloquy immensely. Thank you George for sharing it with us.
George
1/21/2022 08:47:12 pm
Letty, thanks, you make five Jamaica High grads in the respondents. Three from JHS 157. Birds of a feather. Be well. GV Comments are closed.
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More and More, I Talk to the Dead--Margaret Renkl NASHVILLE — After my mother died so suddenly — laughing at a rerun of “JAG” at 10 p.m., dying of a hemorrhagic stroke by dawn — I dreamed about her night after night. In every dream she was willfully, outrageously alive, unaware of the grief her death had caused. In every dream relief poured through me like a flash flood. Oh, thank God! Then I would wake into keening grief all over again. Years earlier, when my father learned he had advanced esophageal cancer, his doctor told him he had perhaps six months to live. He lived far longer than that, though I never thought of it as “living” once I learned how little time he really had. For six months my father was dying, and then he kept dying for two years more. I was still working and raising a family, but running beneath the thin soil of my own life was a river of death. My father’s dying governed my days. After he died, I wept and kept weeping, but I rarely dreamed about my father the way I would dream about my mother nearly a decade later. Even in the midst of calamitous grief, I understood the difference: My father’s long illness had given me time to work death into the daily patterns of my life. My mother’s sudden death had obliterated any illusion that daily patterns are trustworthy. Years have passed now, and it’s the ordinariness of grief itself that governs my days. The very air around me thrums with absence. I grieve the beloved high-school teacher I lost the summer after graduation and the beloved college professor who was my friend for more than two decades. I grieve the father I lost nearly 20 years ago and the father-in-law I lost during the pandemic. I grieve the great-grandmother who died my junior year of college and the grandmother who lived until I was deep into my 40s. Some of those I grieve are people I didn’t even know. How can John Prine be gone? I hear his haunting last song, “I Remember Everything,” and I still can’t quite believe that John Prine is gone. ----- https://www.nytimes.com/2023/01/30/opinion/death-grief-memory.html Jan. 30, 2023 Categories
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